Improvements and Changes

So, after having a few people look at our final piece, including class mates and teachers, we decided our film needed more improving!
We have decided to change a few little bits because the filming is either shaky or doesn't look right. However, we are changing the storyline a little bit too and the script! We wanted to change it slightly so the audience can understnad the characters more, and not to make the production seem so rushed! In the new version, we have added a new little twist to it, we have done this because we wanted to challenge the traditional codes and conventions of a Rom Com!

Now, in our film, instead of the girl and new boy bumping into eachother and talking, we have changed this scene.
The film starts out with the scences of the school, the establishing shots, which we already have from our previous production. It then goes to Ellie and Danielle walking down the school corridor, noticing the new boy walking towards them, and talking about him. Ellie then walks off, while Danielle and the new boy talk for a minute. It then jumps to Danielle sitting in a lesson with Ellie, and talking about how she thinks she likes the new boy.
It then jumps to Danielle at home, talking to the new boy on facebook, flirting with him and chatting. After a while of talking, She then asks him what he is doing at the weekend, and then ask if he wants to go out, while telling Ellie (on facebook) that she has just asked him on a date, but haven't had a reply for 15 minutes, and is worried. The new boy replies, telling me he can't go out with Danielle this weekend, and makes a few excuses for why, she then questions why he keeps making excuses, in the end, he tells her he is gay.

So, those are the changes we have made! Lets hope this one turns out better! ;-) See you soon!